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When he hovered in
the air
his mouth seeming
to float,
gracelessly towards me,

I felt a revulsion,
like a wave
of bad breath
had hit me in the face,

this wasn't the case,
but the first time I felt someone so
close
I was small enough to fit in

a lap, and be given candy
on a string, and the man
was
old,
I knew it because

he was in a wheelchair.
He was sweet
and kind, and
one day he took a fancy,

to take me in his lap,
and kiss me, in a kindly way,
I thought.
Except he got confused,

somewhere on the
way
to
my
face,
as his tongue, like a newt,
crawled
into my mouth,

I barred my
teeth,
and felt
a licking against them, like
knocking
on a door.

I soon forgot about it, until
his daughter,
asked
if he'd
ever kissed me,

ever kissed me
THAT way, I mean.
"You're not in trouble, Karly,
I just
have to know.

Don't you ever let him kiss you like
that again." Such a thunderclap
Such a rain on my face- my tongue

So, I turn
my face away,
as this man
comes so close
to colliding
like a spiral galaxy

smashing into another,
pulling the planets into a new orbit,
breaking apart stars.
Based on a true story
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:iconafreewaylunatic:
afreewaylunatic Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
wow wow wow
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:iconkarlynoelleabreu:
KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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:iconmariahiztim:
MariahIZTIM Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
So beautifully disgusting.
Very well written with such realistic visuals.
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:iconkarlynoelleabreu:
KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconshalmons:
Shalmons Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*hug*
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:iconkarlynoelleabreu:
KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, ma amie.
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:iconwhatthefangirl:
WhatTheFangirl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa...just...whoa
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:iconkarlynoelleabreu:
KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good whoa? Bad whoa?
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:iconwhatthefangirl:
WhatTheFangirl Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
whoa as in intense and very well-written
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:iconmolybdenum-blues:
Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...this is so well-written. Gives me chills
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