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Why would I wake at all,
to find my lips unable to part,
and the heat of loss,
threatening to thaw this
winter, into a lake?

And so, I cannot move,
I'm melted to the spot, and
you, captive in the snow,
awake in forgetfulness.

I wish that I had been warmer,
not sinking into the agony
of hibernation, that I had
counted the drops of rain
that glistened in your hair,
before I breathed them into
a blizzard,
that swept us far apart.
Rogue Poem I
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afreewaylunatic Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
this makes me want to cry but is so wonderfully written as all of your poetry is We need a compilation in book form
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KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, well this is from a series of poems.
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