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By the edge of the pond
our clothes on the ground
Nobody but airplanes could see us,
and the dirt was settling,
the truck cooling,
the grass unbending
from our bodies.

The hum
and sob of cicadas,
and heavy breathing,
as we dove under,
and resurfaced,
lips curling,
mouths
catching air like fireflies
Written in Alabama
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afreewaylunatic Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
I Love this! It evokes pictures, emotions, memories
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KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
Your amazing work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much!
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012
You're welcome.
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Concora Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012   Writer
Such lovely wording, particularly that last line. Wonderful work!
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KarlyNoelleAbreu Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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